Our first piece of writing this year was all about how Marvellous we are. There are some excerpts here but feel free to come into our class to see the full published work.
Marvellous me!
My favourite thing to do when I'm not at school is going to Glenfield pools because I like going down the hydra-slide.
It makes me feel good when my Mum buys me something from the store. It makes me happy.
I worry about when my dad forgets to bring the water home.
I'm looking forward to learning is about under the sea animals because they are so unique.
A good time I had with my family was going kaewe lakes it is a place where you get a cabin to stay in and while I was there I went swimming in the lake. It was really fun.
I sometimes wonder if my dad will ever bring home the water because I'm so thirsty.
If I was an animal I would be a hamster in a little tube cage with food and water.
Something I would like you to know about me is I love to play outside and inside because it’s really fun.
- Molly
Marvellous me!
My favourite place to go is Waikaremoana because I like going on holiday camping there with all of my cousins and there is really big lake.
My favourite thing to do when I am not at school is going in deep swimming pools with friends and parents and going off diving boards also going down super long hydra-slides and doing flips into the water.
I makes me feel good when I get to see my brothers and we go on holiday.
I worry about my school stuff when half of of it is at my mums house and they other half is at my dad's house.
I`m looking forward to learning all of my times tables because I do test at home a good time I had with my family is christmas day all my cousins were at long bay beach.
I sometimes wonder when I am going to my dads house when I am at my mums house because I miss them.
If I was an animal I would be a pterodactyl because they can fly and still stay on the ground.
Something I would like you to know about me is I have 2 brothers and 1 sister.
- Will
Marvellous Me!
My favourite place to go is the beach because I go is the beach because I can play there.
My favourite thing to do when I not at school is goIng to my pool. When I am hot I go to my pool for a swim.
It makes me feel good when I go beach when I go to the beach because I can make a sandball to throw at a rock. It is fun.
I worry about when someone is bossy to me.
I am looking forward to Learning to maths so I can get better.
A good time with my family was the beach because I made the best sand ball. My Mum, brothers and friends all jumped off a tree and one of them slipped. We were all laughing.
- Zara
Marvellous Me!
My favourite place to go is Disneyland because we can eat candy floss.Even they have merry-go-rounds!Did you know that at night merry-go-rounds can sparkle.From Disneyland you can see buildings sparkle and it is spectacular!
My favourite thing to do when I am not at school is lots of holiday parties!Like playing games and having fun!
It makes me feel good when it’s my birthday and when I get a certificate.
I worry about when my mum gets angry at my sister and because she cries a lot and it’s so annoying but my mum is still angry at my sister.
I’m looking forward to learning more of how to be in a production because I want to be an main actor in it.
A good time with my family is when we have a trip to Kaitaia where my friends live. And her house is so close to the beach and I can go with my family too.
Sometimes I wonder that when my friends come over to a sleepover we might fight and I won’t have any friends anymore.
If I was an animal I would be a Tiger because Tigers are very strong and they can jump very high and jump over our heads!
Something I would like you to know about me is that Japanese is so hard and English is much easier.
- Mone
Marvellous Me
My favourite place to go is Huntly because I get to pop
wheelies on the road with my cousin.
My favourite thing to do when I am not at school is going
for kinas. Big and fat juicy kinas.
It makes me feel good when I play on my drums with My Dad.
I worry about playing GTA 4.
I’m looking forward to learning maths.
A good time I had with my family is going to the beach with
my dad.
-Blaze
Marvellous Me
My favourite place to go is home because I like playing with the puppy and my brother with my toys.
My favourite thing to do when I am not at school is playing minecraft and my toys because its fun.
It makes me feel good when I’m swimming in the pool because it’s warm. Sometimes I worry about standing up in class because I just don’t like it.
I’m looking forward to learning more maths because its fun.
A good time I had with my family is when we were in Fiji because it was
relaxing and we were spending time together.
By Ayden
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